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Archaea Chunin
Post[s] : 1100 Joined : 2018-06-28
| Subject: Re: Hiraishin Shandian Approval Section Sun Aug 12 2018, 23:11 | |
| How would that interact with plasma stuff since the Instant Death isn't placed beneath a Drawbacks area. | |
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Omnicron Deity
Post[s] : 1158 Joined : 2013-01-04
Ninja Profile Reputation: S (5000)
| Subject: Re: Hiraishin Shandian Approval Section Sun Aug 19 2018, 21:30 | |
| It will not be able to because of that Instant Death is due to the heat levels that are like the levels of stars themselves but lower levels [ranks] would not have that effect. Remember those techniques are just basic ideas for plasma. That does not mean all Plasma says, "Use me and you are dead deal." | |
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Archaea Chunin
Post[s] : 1100 Joined : 2018-06-28
| Subject: Re: Hiraishin Shandian Approval Section Wed Aug 22 2018, 20:01 | |
| I'll take it.
Now, I still need to make my summon XD | |
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Archaea Chunin
Post[s] : 1100 Joined : 2018-06-28
| Subject: Re: Hiraishin Shandian Approval Section Sat Sep 01 2018, 23:04 | |
| + - Brown Dwarf - > > A small ball of "cool" plasma energy is created. The brown dwarf is the coolest of all stars and this small ball is formed in the sky over the head of the user as they raise their hand upwards. When the user throws their hand downwards, the ball of plasma flies towards the enemy, severely burning everyone around. + Type: Offensive + Hand Seal(s) & Rank: 6 + C + Effect: Life Energy (HP) x 5 + lowers the population of a minor country by 25% | Max Grade Burns + Drawback: Max Grade Burns on the user.
As plasma, I severely reduced the damage (from 100X to 5X), made it only lower the population of a minor country instead of destroy one, and lowered instant death to Max Grade burns. Thoughts? Wasn't sure what a C rank plasma would look like. | |
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Enjin Guru
Occupation[s] : Crafter of Chakra-infused items (weapons and items), fisherman Post[s] : 2035 Joined : 2014-05-24
| Subject: Re: Hiraishin Shandian Approval Section Sat Sep 01 2018, 23:29 | |
| Bear in mind-- plasma on site is MEANT TO be OP. Custom Jutsu might not be as strong as you perceive.
For starters, No way a C rank jutsu is gonna remove population count of any kind. Remove that right there. You can make it an AOE sure but not that kind of thing.
Second, This will need to be confirmed with Omni, but HP X 5 is broken and still super strong. I would use its base damage + have a % of your HP for this. Or at least if HP * X is allowed here, make it 3 or below.
Again, best we discuss this in the discord chat with OMni as well to confirm custom made Plasma's limitations. | |
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Archaea Chunin
Post[s] : 1100 Joined : 2018-06-28
| Subject: Re: Hiraishin Shandian Approval Section Sat Sep 15 2018, 12:18 | |
| My response is that I severely nerfed on site Plasma and kept its intentions while weakening it. If you think it is too powerful, then I suggest we either
1. Weaken Plasma in general
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2. Discuss it with omni | |
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Enjin Guru
Occupation[s] : Crafter of Chakra-infused items (weapons and items), fisherman Post[s] : 2035 Joined : 2014-05-24
| Subject: Re: Hiraishin Shandian Approval Section Sat Sep 15 2018, 16:18 | |
| I say you wait for Omni and i will forward this to him. He was the one to invent plasma, but i am going off base on my experience. so please wait a little bit. | |
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Archaea Chunin
Post[s] : 1100 Joined : 2018-06-28
| Subject: Re: Hiraishin Shandian Approval Section Mon Sep 24 2018, 16:33 | |
| + - Brown Dwarf - > > A small ball of "cool" plasma energy is created. The brown dwarf is the coolest of all stars and this small ball is formed in the sky over the head of the user as they raise their hand upwards. When the user throws their hand downwards, the ball of plasma flies towards the enemy, severely burning everyone around. + Type: Offensive + Hand Seal(s) & Rank: 6 + C + Effect: Life Energy (HP) x 5 + lowers the population of a minor country by 15% | Max Grade Burns + Drawback: Max Grade Burns on the user.
As Omni has suggested, I have made the change to lower the population loss. | |
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Enjin Guru
Occupation[s] : Crafter of Chakra-infused items (weapons and items), fisherman Post[s] : 2035 Joined : 2014-05-24
| Subject: Re: Hiraishin Shandian Approval Section Tue Sep 25 2018, 10:01 | |
| Wait so population is lowered allowed?! | |
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Omnicron Deity
Post[s] : 1158 Joined : 2013-01-04
Ninja Profile Reputation: S (5000)
| Subject: Re: Hiraishin Shandian Approval Section Tue Sep 25 2018, 10:03 | |
| Yes, population returns to normal after 1 week. It just cannot be crazy high unless a trade. | |
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Enjin Guru
Occupation[s] : Crafter of Chakra-infused items (weapons and items), fisherman Post[s] : 2035 Joined : 2014-05-24
| Subject: Re: Hiraishin Shandian Approval Section Tue Sep 25 2018, 10:04 | |
| I see-- then i approve. Approved jutsu | |
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