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Archaea Chunin
Post[s] : 1100 Joined : 2018-06-28
| Subject: Gojisou Reo's Approval List/Page Thu Jul 05 2018, 16:03 | |
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Omnicron Deity
Post[s] : 1158 Joined : 2013-01-04
Ninja Profile Reputation: S (5000)
| Subject: Re: Gojisou Reo's Approval List/Page Wed Jul 11 2018, 20:09 | |
| Understood and I shall be ready when you are. | |
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Archaea Chunin
Post[s] : 1100 Joined : 2018-06-28
| Subject: Re: Gojisou Reo's Approval List/Page Fri Jul 13 2018, 15:57 | |
| [+ - Fuuton - Wind Style - Ransaa - Lancer - >] [> The user dashes forward across the field with their fist outstretched to punch the target. As they move. Wind Chakra builds up in a thin layer around the body. Once the fist makes contact with the enemy, the wind chakra shoots forward and stabs through them with the sharpness of Wind Chakra] + Chakra and Stamina Cost: 20% + Type: Offensive + Hand Seal(s) + Rank: 0 + C + Effect: Piercing (Direct Damage) - Parent Jutsu:
- Ransaa - Lancer - > > The quick jolt of a fist flying across the battlefield to make contact to the target. + Type: Offensive + Rank: E + Damage: 25 + Drawback: - - None - -
Creator: Reo Gojisou | |
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Omnicron Deity
Post[s] : 1158 Joined : 2013-01-04
Ninja Profile Reputation: S (5000)
| Subject: Re: Gojisou Reo's Approval List/Page Fri Jul 13 2018, 20:15 | |
| Wind does not really have a piercing effect to it more so a slicing effect which would allow at least 15% of the technique to Ignore END like how Rasengan works. | |
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Archaea Chunin
Post[s] : 1100 Joined : 2018-06-28
| Subject: Re: Gojisou Reo's Approval List/Page Sat Jul 14 2018, 21:25 | |
| Shiji Hyoketsu - Gojisou Style: Death Protection Blood- > > A perversion of the Death Possession Blood curse created by Reo Gojisou. This new technique utilized the damage transferring principles of the previous technique but flips them on their head. The user of this jutsu can craft a symbol of an ouroboros on the target out of the user’s blood. The user must also place the symbol of a target on themselves using the targets blood. This forged a link between them. When the two are within thirty feet of each other, the person with the target will take all damage from the person with the ouroboros - leaving them completely unharmed. + Type: Defensive + Hand Seal(s) + Rank: 0 + C + Effect: Any damage dealt to the Ourovoros marked person will be dealt to the Target marked person instead. + Drawback: Must be standing within thirty feet of each other. Jutsu cannot be undone unless the symbol on either person is broken or the “Target” marked person dies. - Parent Jutsu:
Shiji Hyoketsu - Death Possession Blood- > > One will draw the symbol of "Jashin" a circle with a triangle within it. The body will turn black with a white skeleton. This will link the player and target so any damage done to the player the target will take it instead. + Type: Offensive + Hand Seal(s) + Rank: 0 + D + Effect: Any damage at the player is transferred to the enemy instead. + Drawback: Must be standing within the symbol.
[+ - Fuuton - Wind Style - Ransaa - Lancer - >] [> The user dashes forward across the field with their fist outstretched to punch the target. As they move. Wind Chakra builds up in a thin layer around the body. Once the fist makes contact with the enemy, the wind chakra shoots forward and flows through their body causing internal damage] + Chakra and Stamina Cost: 20% + Type: Offensive + Hand Seal(s) + Rank: 0 + C + Effect: Direct damage - Parent Jutsu:
- Ransaa - Lancer - > > The quick jolt of a fist flying across the battlefield to make contact to the target. + Type: Offensive + Rank: E + Damage: 25 + Drawback: - - None - -
Creator: Reo Gojisou | |
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Archaea Chunin
Post[s] : 1100 Joined : 2018-06-28
| Subject: Re: Gojisou Reo's Approval List/Page Sat Jul 14 2018, 21:25 | |
| Added a new jutsu idea and tried a different method of getting direct damage | |
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Enjin Guru
Occupation[s] : Crafter of Chakra-infused items (weapons and items), fisherman Post[s] : 2035 Joined : 2014-05-24
| Subject: Re: Gojisou Reo's Approval List/Page Sat Jul 14 2018, 21:51 | |
| Hold on both--
1, Death Protection Blood--- that kind of technique is stupidly power to transfer all damage to you . The curse requires a symbol and blood from enemy to work traditionally. You would need to first use a technique that will land the mark on them. Second, a set duration. Its not gonna be continuous OR have an upkeep to keep it going if its gonna have a range like that.
2. Direct Damage on a Taijutsu is costly Chakra and Stamina plus it considers which stat to deliver? Also if this is taijutsu, a stress counter will be required or some kind of drawback. | |
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Archaea Chunin
Post[s] : 1100 Joined : 2018-06-28
| Subject: Re: Gojisou Reo's Approval List/Page Sat Jul 14 2018, 22:22 | |
| 1. I kept the same restrictions as the original but changed it so there was a distance requirement rather than a symbol I stand in. I can pull the same stunt with the D rank original version with no problem. If the effect is powerful, then revise the original rather than bash my version which in reality just has different flavor.
2. Only two C ranked Taijutsu have drawbacks. Regardless, the stress counter drawbacks are only on Hachimon related jutsu (must have released first gate) and the drawback on Taijutsu is a poor mechanic regardless since Taijutsu are already weakened by not using Dex - which gives automatic evades. It used chakra and stamina because this is a Nintaijutsu. Both are placed at the C rank level which means I’m paying full chakra and full stamina cost for this jutsu - effectively making it cost twice as much as a normal jutsu. As for damage, since Dexterity makes no sense for ninjutsu anyway, I would like it based on BRW. The idea is that the wind chakra transfers the blow into the opponent’s body by acting as a shockwave.
I challenge your “direct damage on taijutsu is costly” comment by asking how it’s different for ninjutsu or taijutsu? I would also like to point out - again - that this is Nintaijutsu and not straight Taijutsu.
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Archaea Chunin
Post[s] : 1100 Joined : 2018-06-28
| Subject: Re: Gojisou Reo's Approval List/Page Sun Jul 15 2018, 09:11 | |
| + - Fuuton - Wind Style - Destruction Disk - >] [> The epitome of nature manipulation for Fuuton. The chakra takes the form of a large disk. Due to the nature of Wind Chakra, this disk is extremely thin and capable of cutting through near anything. + Chakra Cost: 20% + Type: Offensive + Hand Seal(s) + Rank: 5 + A + Effect: Choose a limb. That limb is cut off and can not be used unless reattached.
Basically, trying to make the destructo disk from dbz. Would like to sell to site since I couldn’t use it yet anyway. Idea is that since Chidori is said to be the ideal of nature manipulation for Raiton that a slicing blade that could be thrown but that doesn’t do the explosive cutting thing that rasenshurikan does could be Fuuton with a ton of Nature Manipulation but without the shape manipulation | |
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Omnicron Deity
Post[s] : 1158 Joined : 2013-01-04
Ninja Profile Reputation: S (5000)
| Subject: Re: Gojisou Reo's Approval List/Page Sun Jul 15 2018, 17:12 | |
| Shiji Hyoketsu - Gojisou Style: Death Protection Blood- > > A perversion of the Death Possession Blood curse created by Reo Gojisou. This new technique utilized the damage transferring principles of the previous technique but flips them on their head. The user of this jutsu can craft a symbol of an ouroboros on the target out of the user’s blood. The user must also place the symbol of a target on themselves using the targets blood. This forged a link between them. When the two are within thirty feet of each other, the person with the target will take all damage from the person with the ouroboros - leaving them completely unharmed. + Type: Defensive + Hand Seal(s) + Rank: 0 + C + Effect: Any damage dealt to the Ouroboros marked person will be dealt to the Target marked person instead. + Drawback: Must be standing within thirty feet of each other. Jutsu cannot be undone unless the symbol on either person is broken or the “Target” marked person dies.
^ Just be sure that show that you need the blood of the target on you, as I have fixed the issue with the actual technique that came from its parent.
[+ - Fuuton - Wind Style - Ransaa - Lancer - >] [> The user dashes forward across the field with their fist outstretched to punch the target. As they move. Wind Chakra builds up in a thin layer around the body. Once the fist makes contact with the enemy, the wind chakra shoots forward and flows through their body causing internal damage] + Chakra and Stamina Cost: 20% + Type: Offensive + Hand Seal(s) + Rank: 0 + C + Effect: Direct damage < - 15% DMG is Direct Damage "That is what i meant in my previous message."
+ - Fuuton - Wind Style - Destruction Disk - >] [> The epitome of nature manipulation for Fuuton. The chakra takes the form of a large disk. Due to the nature of Wind Chakra, this disk is extremely thin and capable of cutting through near anything. + Chakra Cost: 20% + Type: Offensive + Hand Seal(s) + Rank: 5 + A + Effect: Choose a limb. That limb is cut off and can not be used unless reattached.
[b] ^ The issue with this being thrown is not possible, as Rasenshuriken could not be thrown until Naruto obtained Sage Mode or even Nature Energy. | |
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