Asakura Grave - License/Request section

Stepping in for a bit,

Grave & Enjin

- Tsukiyomi does not state rather the target is, conscious or unconscious through it. As for the 3 posts they are unable to its to show what is happening within the 3 seconds. For both parties to witness what is happening or being performed. Also the technique is attacking the mind to which it is damaging the body in a mental state to cause them to fall into a coma like state.

- Takamagahara does not state rather the target is, conscious or unconscious through it also. Because the technique is striking the body its given the illusion to the mind to make it seem like fear is taking over them. The said Target could still move to another target just not the one that placed the technique on them. Could be best be like being intimidated by someone, you know you are strong but the person gives you the pressure or feeling they could overpower you instantly.

To Grave: The technique can be allowed but change the effect that they said target cannot move/attack at "Player." Because of this "Feeling" they are around someone royalty.

To Enjin: Not all Genjutsu will cause the player to say if its a conscious or unconscious attack, because during which if someone is unconscious, then the genjutsu would be pointless of placing someone in an illusion as they are out cold. So it would mean they are always conscious unless saying that it attacks them in their dreams. Prime example, Orochimaru's genjutsu pills, it only worked when unconscious though the target became conscious during a battle.

2. The Style as said by Enjin is correct lower its effects from 50% to 25%.

3. Fear and Displacement, Enjin are good the way they are because of several reasons.

Fear:
Advantage wise: Like displacement he'd get a bonus to allowing him to evade techniques a bit easier based upon the enemies rolls. However that does not mean he'll be able to dodge them.

Disadvantage wise: He must have 10% more chakra than said target no matter what to even trigger the effect of the technique. So if he does not paying for the technique would be pointless and paying before hand while the target is still strong in chakra would be a waste.

Displacement:
Advantage wise: Grave only get -1 Action to be Direct Damage. This gives him a max of 3 Actions, This can also be said for the Reaction part to evading Damage. He's using the technique that even Hayabusa has to allow him to evade damage and strike on that said turn. Catching him off guard the only difference the technique cannot be used unless in the style and if he triggers with the style.

Disadvantage wise: For 3 turns a total of 9 Actions could be direct damage, but could all miss if the player uses an evading technique during every one of those, thus causing him to burn Chakra plus Stamina to which even if he were to trigger the Style it would still be wasting more chakra and stamina to perform that said technique. The only +1 to this just allowing him to use the technique as a reactionary dodge like Hayabusa but only within the style after which he may not have to dodge. But again even if he does perform this technique he needs the style + the technique which would still cost him.

Water Moon
Grave: Its confusing a little but because I see what your aim was at, it was bouncing chakra that was paid back at the target. BUT like Enjin said does it mean the chakra coming back is an Element based if element is used? From what the old version shows that is a no. As you are just using Chakra in general to strike back. Also with that change it from saying Nin + Gen jutsus because of the fact one Jutsus could mean everything including Taijutsu.

There you go guys I hoped that helped you both out in understanding a little of how do deal with each other's techniques more.

Understood, and I will get started on that as well for revamping of those techniques that are mentioned.

Im cool about fear and displacement then. but my perspective it seemed like a no go.

Takamagahara - (Plain of High Heaven)
> A powerful illusionary technique that captures its targets different than most. As it effects the body not the mind causing them freeze unable to strike the target as though they are a being of high royalty. The illusion can be casted without having to make any eye contact also triggers upon physical contact, but the Mangekyou Sharingan must be activated.
+ Chakra & Stamina Cost: 350 & 263
+ Eternal Darkness Cost: -2 ED
+ Type: Supplementary + Contact/Visual
+ Hand Seal[s] + Rank: 0 + [?]
+ Effect: Targets unable to move/attack "Player" for 3 Turn[s] + N. Attributes -25% when captured.

+ - Shadow Slayer Reflection Style - > New Version
- The style allows an increased reactionary timing allowing them to within the mist of their own shadow reappearing to catching their target off guard.
+ Cost: -1 Actions (Activate)
+ Type: Active + Supplementary
+ Limit: 3
+ Effect: Unlock Kenjutsu “Shadow Slayer Techniques” + Enemies DMG -25%
+ Creator: Uchiha Tsukiyomi
Fixed, all good now?

Both look fine to me so I'll give them them my stamp but the remaining has to still be with Enjin on them. As he started the review.

I approve of both. Ty for putting up with my questions. I mean i admit Genjutsu is my least favorite topic to analyze. But yeah. its good if you think so

Goseigan - The Eye of Understanding (Understanding Eye)
- This evolution occurs for a small moment in the life span of a Asakura. After which the eye shapes into the form of a seven pointed star. But upon which its powers do not change as its a middle ground for the eye's true form coming.
Effects: n/a
Requirement: Its a mid-evolution its just for show

Tokugan - The Eye of Rebirth (Rebirth Eye)
- The true evolution of the Godougan, a legend among the Asakura Clan, it was said the eye can only be born from the one that completes the ritual of rebirth, to which one that has become "enlighten must come to understanding and be reborn once again." Meaning Upon having the eye of Enlightenment, then coming to understanding of what is truth to the person. They are able to come to morals and accept their new life they are about to create for themselves or reborn into.
Requirements: One must perform a Massacre Mission. (Clan or Family), + Removal of two Abilities [They ability slot permenatly decreases.] Unable to revert back to Godougan.

Desc of eye - The pentagram that formed seven points now shrinks becoming a yin and yang symbol within the pupils as the with the iris turning the opposite color. Each eye has its own abilities, however in order for them to work both eyes are needed if one is destroyed the eye other eye becomes weaker.

Yin - + 2 Elemental Slots (Whenever the Eye is removed it loses this power)

Yang - Able to see movements (x.25 to Enemy Rolls | x1.25% to Player Rolls) (Whenever the Eye is removed it loses this power.

Yin/Yang - Able to mix Yin and Yang Element together. (Requires both eyes to even work.)

I will say this so everyone knows of it, The rules stated that a Clan cannot of the elements yin/yang mixtures into them. Meaning the clan members cannot start with yin/yang mix at the start like a character starting with Ranton as the example even shows.

This also leads to another of coming close to a Doujutsu the Rinnegan, its powers cannot not be truly copied into another clan. As showing in Grave's case he's using the Rinnegan's elemental slot and Mix together. The only thing about it is this as to why I allow it.

If either eye is missing, destroyed or w/e ever the case may be. They lose the ability to mix also loss of its own ability. So within the rules Grave is able to do this and possible to create the clan to do this as well as these are good examples to show one's way of battling against the site in a way.

At the same time Rinnegan keeps its abilities even if the user loses 1 eye. So again this close to the powers of a Rinnegan but its not able to come close to the powers of the Rinnegan only based upon elements.

So this is APPROVED

New Element, I have finally finished it the study to make Grave completely unique to the site and make something that everyone can use but...only after training with Grave.

With the combinations of Katon + Fuuton + Doton, we have Dust element from which comes in any third dimensional shapes (Cone, Cube or Sphere) But it does not stay after it is used...until now.

With that combination with adding one more...Suiton now it can form into other shapes instantly like the T.S.B and using the floating ability of Scorching being Katon + Fuuton, these will be able to hover, then with Doton it gives it matter and able to hold its form and Suiton allowing it to freely change its form and hold it because of Doton.

I give you...Jiitaiton - Matter Style!

it will be a Kekkei Genkai only to which Grave has finally unlocked for himself to and the new clan that is to be coming soon.

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