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PostSubject: Re: Asura Jiin's character approval requests   Asura Jiin's character approval requests - Page 8 EmptySun Jun 25 2017, 20:25

For the sake of space and time , gonna post up only the unapproved jutsu here.

1.+ - Katon/Enton to Shounetsuton - >
> This allows those who have awakened the power of Shounetsuton to convert Katon, even Enton jutsu into Shounetsuton. As a result, the previous jutsu are given new life and power by paying extra in chakra. Jutsu enhanced by Shounetsuton become unparalleled in power. The flames of life are drawn to the physical energy of the target, driven to burn them to ashes.
+ Chakra & Stamina Cost: Katon/Enton Drain x1.25
+ Type: Offensive
+ Hand Seal(s) + Rank: +1 of Katon's & "?"
+ Damage + Effect: (DMG = Targets Stamina ) is added to enhanced Jutsu's damage. + Burn Status HP Drain is increased by X1.50
+SP. Effect: If user has the Tengan active, DMG = Target's MAX Stamina instead + Burn Status cannot be negated.
+Parent Jutsu : " Katon to Enton " by Hayabusa Uchiha.
+Created by: "Asura Jiin"
AP Cost: 700

2.Yang Release Seal: Heavenly Sun Rejuvenation.
> A seal normally invisible but positioned over the heart of the body in the shape of a tribal sun. It appears when triggered. The overflow of life energy that radiates from Yang Release chakra rejuvenates the person after suffering catastrophic injury, either by an enemy or by overexertion of the own body. However, one who has Yang Release chakra within them, can never be killed by conventional methods, which grants the bearer of the mark eternal youth and immortality.
Chakra & Stamina Cost : 500 & 275 (to cast). Releasing the seal costs none.
Hand Seals & Rank: 4 + S
Seal Type: Even
Effect: Restores all nexus stats , HP, chakra control and status conditions to 100%. Includes Sage Mode and Inner Gate 'near death state'.

No, because that would cause the forms to be broken and the only time the side effects of those were even avoid was during the movie Bonds for Inner Gates and Six Paths wearing off during the battle with Sasuke and Naruto but either or he was still running out of chakra
Sp. Passive Effect: Possessing Yang Release = Target user cannot age beyond their mid-20s and are Immortal.
Restrictions & Requirement: Must have 100% Yang Release Mastery. May be cast on another person-- but will fade after one use unless user has Yang Element. Unable to use after activation for 1 month IRL. Can only be undo/broken if user has yang Release/Yin-yang release.
Ap Cost: 600

Jutsu for Vidav---
Vidav Jutsu wrote:


+ - Tiger Eyes' Hypnotism - >
> Vidav glares into an opponent's eyes and plunges his will deep into his victim's mind. Target becomes hypnotized by the caster, unable to resist his will and do his bidding. The eyes of the tiger intimidates even the most brave. Even as the victim is hypnotized, Vidav is deeply connected to the mental state of the victim, able to read his mind effectively to determine the truth. This jutsu may also be used to interrupt the Genjutsu of another enemy, saving an ally.
+ Chakra & Stamina Cost: 460 & 253
+ Contact + Type: Sight /Touch + Supplementary
+ Hand Seal(s) + Rank: 1 + S
+ Effect: Hypnotizes target = Caster can control actions of opponent in place of his own for a grand total of 5 turns. + Target must answer all questions truthfully. (Paralysis. Target must answer all questions truthfully-- that they are conscious of.)  |  Negate effect of 1 S class Genjutsu on an ally.
+ Restrictions and Drawbacks:

++ - Suiton: Mirror World Phantasm - >
> Using Suiton, Vidav creates a large mirror which reflects the image of the caster that looks into it. In response, creates a mirror clone of the caster. This mystic mirror copies the opponent down to the last detail, as well as the jutsu they control. This jutsu forces an opponent to attack themselves, which also results in damage to the enemy's mind.  
+ Chakra & Stamina Cost: 500 & 325
+ Contact + Type: Sight + Supplementary
+ Hand Seal(s) + Rank: 1 + S
+ Effect: Creates a full identical clone of opponent. Opponent Actions = Auto Blocked. Clone will counter each attack original uses with its own jutsu. Each time a Jutsu is countered and dispelled-- opponent's mind Gauge is reduced -15% each attack.
+ Limit: 4.
+ Restrictions and Drawbacks: Block can only work on Melee, Ninjutsu, Taijutsu, Bukotsujutsu.

+ - Medical Ninjutsu: Symbiosis-
> Similar to the puppet technique, Vidav uses chakra threads to connect to an ally. However, unlike traditional strings meant to manipulate targets, these strings add an extension that interacts with the attached parties circulatory system, nervous system and chakra network. Through this method, not only is one able to transfer charka, but able to influence their allies chakra nature from a distance. The applications for this technique are varied, including transferring and sharing chakra, removing Genjutsu from allies, but also using another's body and senses to cast Genjutsu on an enemy, making it harder to avoid or counter.
+ Chakra & Stamina Cost (Upkeep): 500 & 325 (325 & 211)
+ Type: Supplementary
+ Hand Seal(s) + Rank: 1 + S rank
+ Effect: Chakra and resources between Summon and Summoner is now shared. + Also the two are aware of both's surroundings through partially shared senses and gain telepathy between them. + While upkeep is paid, the following abilities may be used once for actions.

Mind Gauge = 100% + Negate up to S Rank Genjutsu
Heals X1.30 HP + Remove 1 Status Condition. > Trade HP or 1 Status Condition to other.
Transfer Genjutsu Contact type from one user to another.
Recovers X1.20% of stamina + -1 Stress > Trade Stamina w/o Stress


+ Restrictions and Drawbacks: Only Maximum of 2 of the above options can be used per turn. Options takes a separate action to trigger. + While Symbiosis is active, the caster cannot cast any other jutsu during its duration. + Reactions used by Vidav causes the jutsu to break, and must be recast if to be used again.

(Redoing this jutsu now that I understand the effects per rank)
5.+ - Sacred Tiger Claws- - > Shinsei Tora no Tsume

> A sacred jutsu bound to the weapons of the Tigers. Their claws always tore their enemies to shreds, and now too can they use them to rend through space itself. By slashing at a pocket of space, one may tear through reality and cross space through the claw-shaped slash. The tears can be used for multiple purposes from fast-travel teleportation to evading enemy attacks by cutting a portal via the claws. With careful placement and proper control, one can use the portals to bypass enemy defenses or redirect an enemy's attack. One must have a clear location/idea in mind of where each tear in space occurs.
+ Chakra & Stamina Cost: 400 & 260  > Lvl 2.= X 1.15 cost.
+ Type: Defense, Supplementary
+ Hand Seal(s) + Rank: 0 + ?
+ Effect: Instant Travel (May travel with 1 extra person through portal/contact) | User evade All Enemy Actions
+ Lvl 2: Reflect 1 Enemy Attack against new target | 1 Action = Can’t be blocked/reflected.
+ Requirement & Restriction: Jikku Manipulation Knowledge + Must have “Tiger Claw” Weapon Equipt, forged from Shinkoku territory.
+Creator: Asura Jiin
AP Cost: 700

Item:

6. Kunai Tuning Fork
An oddly made two prong kunai. It is not ideal for combat, but is capable of dealing a blow when needed. However, its more unique feature comes from its constitution of the metal. When struck, the sound it produces is clear and reacts on a high-level pitch that is almost not audible for animals' hearing. It is proven as a great tool for those who value the use of Genjutsu.
Type: Ninja Tool.
Damage: _____ + Sound Base Genjutsu cannot be blocked by earplugs.
Blue Print X 1____ Ingot + Optional -1 Gem = Makes 3
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PostSubject: Re: Asura Jiin's character approval requests   Asura Jiin's character approval requests - Page 8 EmptySun Jul 02 2017, 12:26

Rewriting Yang Seal-- changes made after talk on Discord.

2.Yang Release Seal: Heavenly Sun Rejuvenation.
> A seal normally invisible but positioned over the heart of the body in the shape of a tribal sun. It appears when triggered. The overflow of life energy that radiates from Yang Release chakra rejuvenates the person after suffering catastrophic injury, either by an enemy or by overexertion of the own body. However, one who has Yang Release chakra within them, can never age beyond a certain point. They gain eternal youth and infinite longevity.
Chakra & Stamina Cost : 500 & 275 (to cast). Releasing the seal costs none.
Hand Seals & Rank: 4 + S
Seal Type: Even
Effect: Restores all nexus stats , HP, Chakra Control and status conditions to 100%.(Excludes Near Death State)

Sp. Passive Effect: Possess Yang Release = Target user cannot age beyond their mid-20s and have infinite longevity. + Adds +3 to Mantra Inner Gates limits.
Restrictions & Requirement: May be cast on another person-- but will fade after one use unless user has Yang Release Element. Unable to use after activation for 1 month IRL. Can only be undo/broken if user has yang Release/Yin-yang release.
Ap Cost: 600
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PostSubject: Re: Asura Jiin's character approval requests   Asura Jiin's character approval requests - Page 8 EmptyTue Jul 04 2017, 16:08

The following is me rewriting Vidav summoning jutsu that still needs approving. Now that i understand the limit of S class, i hope this works. Symbiosis i changed to only use one of the selective effects seperated from actions, but now using 1, not 2 out of them. Also chakra upkeep cost is paid by both-- each paying half of the cost to maintain the connection. ANd symbiosis now justified by the caster cannot use other jutsu, so defense of the caster requires aid of the summoner. If that isn't Symbiotic, then what the fuck is?



+ - Tiger Eyes' Hypnotism - >
> Vidav glares into an opponent's eyes and plunges his will deep into his victim's mind. Target becomes hypnotized by the caster, unable to resist his will and do his bidding. The eyes of the tiger intimidates even the most brave. Even as the victim is hypnotized, Vidav is deeply connected to the mental state of the victim, able to read his mind effectively to determine the truth. This jutsu may also be used to interrupt the Genjutsu of another enemy, saving an ally.
+ Chakra & Stamina Cost: 460 & 253
+ Contact + Type: Sight /Touch + Supplementary
+ Hand Seal(s) + Rank: 1 + S
+ Effect: Hypnotizes target = Caster can control actions of opponent in place of his own for a grand total of 5 turns. + Target must answer all questions truthfully. (Paralysis. Target must answer all questions truthfully-- that they are conscious of.)  |  Negate effect of 1 S class Genjutsu on an ally.
+ Restrictions and Drawbacks:

+ - Suiton: Mirror World Phantasm - >
> Using Suiton, Vidav creates a large mirror which reflects the image of the target that looks into it. In response, creates a mirror clone of the caster. This mystic mirror copies the opponent down to the last detail, as well as the jutsu they control. This jutsu forces an opponent to attack themselves, which also results in damage to the enemy's mind.  
+ Chakra & Stamina Cost: 500 & 325
+ Contact + Type: Sight/Touch + Defense/ Supplementary
+ Hand Seal(s) + Rank: 1 + S
+ Effect: Creates a full identical clone of opponent and Opponent Actions = Auto Blocked by mimicking enemy's jutsu/attack exactly. + Each time a Jutsu is blocked/countered, opponent's mind Gauge is reduced -15% each attack.
+ Limit: 4.
+ Restrictions and Drawbacks: Block can only work on Melee, Ninjutsu, Taijutsu, Bukijutsu.

+ - Medical Ninjutsu: Symbiosis
> Similar to the puppet technique, Vidav uses chakra threads to connect to an ally. However, unlike traditional strings meant to manipulate targets, these strings add an extension that interacts with the attached parties circulatory system, nervous system and chakra network. Through this method, not only is one able to transfer charka, but able to influence their allies chakra nature from a distance. The applications for this technique are varied, including healing wounds, removing Genjutsu from allies, but also using another's body and senses to cast Genjutsu on an enemy, making it harder to avoid or counter. However, this jutsu requires great concentration and the caster is unable to use other jutsu to maintain this connection-- leaving protection of the caster up to the summoner who summoned Vidav.
+ Chakra & Stamina Cost (Upkeep): 500 & 325 (325 & 211)
Note: Summon and summoner pays half for upkeep between them to maintain jutsu.
+ Type: Supplementary
+ Hand Seal(s) + Rank: 1 + S rank
+ Effect: Vidav and the attached target is aware of both's surroundings through partially shared senses and gain telepathy between them. + While upkeep is paid, the following abilities may be used once for actions:

  • Mind Gauge = 100% + Negate up to S Rank Genjutsu
  • Heals X1.30 HP + Remove 1 Status Condition.
  • Transfer Genjutsu Contact type from one user to another.
  • Regenerates X1.30 Stamina to target + removes -3 stress from target.



+ Restrictions and Drawbacks: While Symbiosis is active, the caster cannot cast any other jutsu during its duration. To recast, they must pay the original cost all over again. + Only Maximum of 1 of the above options can be used per turn separated from actions.
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PostSubject: Re: Asura Jiin's character approval requests   Asura Jiin's character approval requests - Page 8 EmptyThu Jul 06 2017, 18:44

Lower Tiger Hypnosis to 3 Turns

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+ - Tiger Eyes' Hypnotism - >
> Vidav glares into an opponent's eyes and plunges his will deep into his victim's mind. Target becomes hypnotized by the caster, unable to resist his will and do his bidding. The eyes of the tiger intimidates even the most brave. Even as the victim is hypnotized, Vidav is deeply connected to the mental state of the victim, able to read his mind effectively to determine the truth. This jutsu may also be used to interrupt the Genjutsu of another enemy, saving an ally.
+ Chakra & Stamina Cost: 460 & 253
+ Contact + Type: Sight /Touch + Supplementary
+ Hand Seal(s) + Rank: 1 + S
+ Effect: Hypnotizes target = Caster can control actions of opponent in place of his own for a grand total of 3 turns. + Target must answer all questions truthfully. (Paralysis. Target must answer all questions truthfully-- that they are conscious of.) | Negate effect of 1 S class Genjutsu on an ally.
+ Restrictions and Drawbacks:


Fixed and done-- ty Omni!
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Due to a misunderstanding that -- i cannot make ninjutsu that truly do anything to enemy chakra network-- so I need to fix some jutsu including its parent ones that work on it. Along with other jutsu that were poorly constructed after new rules.

Also know-- the Taiyou Chakra Modes in here, I am trying to follow the new rule but give the new jutsu a power to be added to the first. If possible great-- if not, lets try to slowly work it out. Thank you.

Fixing Jutsu:


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Bump . please go over
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bump again damnit
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>_> Really...I should just let it be I told you I was in a lot of pain and I'd post up as soon as I could what needed to be worked.

4.< - Shounetsuton : Yoake Mandara - Dawn Mandala >
> Combining the power of Inferno Release with change in chakra-form, the caster molds the white flames to form a wide-area pattern along the ground. Upon activation, the flames erupt outward and take on solid shape around the caster. The shape and power creates a protective space that blocks incoming attacks from all sides, using an enemy’s own physical energy against them. From the ground, it appears to look like a strange white lotus flower—from the air, it forms a perfect geometric pattern that is a holy symbol of a mythic empire.
> + Chakra & Stamina Cost: 425 & 230
+ Type: Defense + Supplementary
+ Hand Seal(s) + Rank: 4 + A
+ Effects: Blocks All DMG = Attacker’s MAX Stamina. + If Attacker’s Damage is lower than their Max Stamina, difference is reflected at them as damage OR difference added to defending user’s stamina.
+ Drawback:
+ AP: 500

1. wtf?! If it blocks all Damage to my MAX stamina, then it be fine, BUT if my attack damage is lower than my stamina it be pointless, cause then it bounces back my END would cover the difference. But at the same time if my damage is being blocked by again "MY" stamina then how are you taking the difference and adding it to you if you bounced it back at me?!?!

5.+ - Shouton: Jade Soul Prism - >
> The caster creates a solid barrier of super-dense crystal fused together with chakra that surrounds himself or an ally. Forming a solid crystal-- its laced with chakra to prevent penetration from enemy forces. An impregnable defense. While inside the crystal, however, the crystal has an unique property that draws in and magnifies Nature Energy-- similar to how a prism focuses and refracts light.
+ Chakra & Stamina Cost: 400 & 220
+ Type: Defense + Supplementary
+ Hand Seal(s) + Rank: 3 + A
+ Effect: Target protected is untargetable inside crystal. Blocking = Caster's END (X2.0) and can't be destroyed unless taking +3000 DMG + Immune to Piercing status/Auto destroy barrier jutsu.
+ Sp. Effect: If target inside crystal absorbs N.E., instead of 80 NE per absorption, it becomes 20% Max NE.
+Restrictions & Requirements: Cannot be destroyed till damage exceeds blocking power (Remains active till broken).
AP: 500

1. Blocking can equal Caster's END x2 which is fine, however the damage it can block is also how strong the barrier would be so +3000 DMG would not be needed. Also it would not be able to stop piercing damage or auto destroy things because one if one is able to pierce through the barrier which again is still END they could. Like Chidori cutting through a door, BUT I do not see a problem with it, because again the barrier can be destroyed.

2.+ Sp. Effect: If target inside crystal absorbs N.E., instead of 80 NE per absorption, it becomes 20% Max NE. Change that....to while inside, NE Absorption Per turn is 25% Max NE.
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PostSubject: Re: Asura Jiin's character approval requests   Asura Jiin's character approval requests - Page 8 EmptyMon Jul 17 2017, 18:24

OKay got rid of jutsu damage reflection.

< - Shounetsuton : Yoake Mandara - Dawn Mandala >
> Combining the power of Inferno Release with change in chakra-form, the caster molds the white flames to form a wide-area pattern along the ground. Upon activation, the flames erupt outward and take on solid shape around the caster. The shape and power creates a protective space that blocks incoming attacks from all sides, using an enemy’s own physical energy against them. From the ground, it appears to look like a strange white lotus flower—from the air, it forms a perfect geometric pattern that is a holy symbol of a mythic empire.
> + Chakra & Stamina Cost: 425 & 230
+ Type: Defense + Supplementary
+ Hand Seal(s) + Rank: 4 + A
+ Effects: Blocks All DMG = Attacker’s MAX Stamina. + If Attacker’s Damage is lower than their Max Stamina, difference is added to defending user’s stamina.
+ Drawback:
+ AP: 500

5.+ - Shouton: Jade Soul Prism - >
> The caster creates a solid barrier of super-dense crystal fused together with chakra that surrounds himself or an ally. Forming a solid crystal-- its laced with chakra to prevent penetration from enemy forces. An impregnable defense. While inside the crystal, however, the crystal has an unique property that draws in and magnifies Nature Energy-- similar to how a prism focuses and refracts light.
+ Chakra & Stamina Cost: 400 & 220
+ Type: Defense + Supplementary
+ Hand Seal(s) + Rank: 3 + A
+ Effect: Target protected is untargetable inside crystal (Crystal must be broken first to attack enemy). Blocking = Caster's END (X2.0) + Piercing status = Breaks Barrier only (separate action) .
+ Sp. Effect: If target inside crystal absorbs N.E., instead of 80 NE per absorption, it becomes 25% Max NE.
+Restrictions & Requirements: Cannot be destroyed till damage exceeds blocking power (Remains active till broken).
AP: 500

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