Hayabusa/Shadow's Licenses Request

Rebump

The jutsu chart was added btw did you use that to review over the techniques? Cause i remember you stating you would wait till it was up.

Word of advice try and steer clear of using techniques that improve EXP and/or Training Gains/Points reason being cause of the new way of gaining EXP has been added and everything that is done within character is giving EXP.

2. Medical – Rapid Memory Loss- A jutsu that puts harmful chakra into the air, with the help of nature chakra, and invades the target’s mind through any and all bodily entrances and targets overused and repetitive techniques, skills, or abilities, making the target temporarily forget how to use them.
Rank: B
NCD + Stamina Cost: 300 & 135 < New Costs
Effect: After using something repetitively three times within the 5 post time span, target forgets how to use it for 4 turns.
[Approved with this costing.]

3. Genjutsu Dome: Sonritzu – Nature chakra it used to exert Hayabusa/Shadow’s Sonritzu Genjutsu. This contact type acts as all and any Genjutsu contact type simultaneously
Contact Type: Varies
Rank: ?
Nature Chakra Drain + Stamina Drain: 700 + 525 < New Costs
Effect: Undetectable Genjutsu (Doujutsu or Sage Mode have see through Genjutsu abilities) + Mind Gauge -66% (Targets unable to release technique)
Drawback: If bounced back Caster takes Mind Gauge Halved as damage.
Approved with these effects and costs.

4. Time & Space: Prison Limbo
Change the wording a bit to suit the effects given. Due to the long system of having it work along that line. Its hard to do all that jut making it something like so. From what I typed within the effects verses what you had. In a way this dimension technique can still exist as Tsukiyomi was a Genjutsu with a Time/Space effect to it. So in a way this technique falls under that.
A place where one is kept as either punishment, or for training. Another dimension created where the time is accelerated. The time in this portal goes by ten years a day, making the person age. The space is infinite, being what the creator of the dimension wants it to be. When finally pulled out of the dimension, the age process reverses. However, the mental AND physical toll is critical and very real. Though balance is restored to ones body, excluding major bodily changes.
Rank: ?
CD | SD : 800 + 600 < New Costs

Mine:

Yours:

5. Medical: Mind Enhancement.
This jutsu coats the body of the target in a form of chakra the boosts mind to body coordination by entering the brain. It does have a downfall in the end though.
Rank: B > Change to E
CD|SD: 300| 120 > New Costs (75 + 11)
Effect: Boosts Actions to target by +1 for 2 posts
Drawback: 5% Mind Damage when expired < Making Mind Gauge -5% and safer on your or partner’s end.
Restriction: Cannot stack on same target
Approved with these effects and costs.

2. Medical – Rapid Memory Loss- A jutsu that puts harmful chakra into the air, with the help of nature chakra, and invades the target’s mind through any and all bodily entrances and targets overused and repetitive techniques, skills, or abilities, making the target temporarily forget how to use them.
Rank: B
NCD + Stamina Cost: 300 & 135 < New Costs
Effect: After using something repetitively three times within the 3 post time span, target forgets how to use it for 4 turns.
Approved with these effects and costs.

3. Genjutsu Dome: Sonritzu – Nature chakra it used to exert Hayabusa/Shadow’s Sonritzu Genjutsu. This contact type acts as all and any Genjutsu contact type simultaneously
Contact Type: Varies
Rank: ?
Nature Chakra Drain + Stamina Drain: 700 + 525 < New Costs
Effect: Undetectable Genjutsu (Doujutsu or Sage Mode have see through Genjutsu abilities) + Mind Gauge -66% (Targets unable to release technique)
Drawback: If bounced back Caster takes Mind Gauge Halved as damage.
Approved with these effects and costs.

4. Time & Space: Prison Limbo
Change the wording a bit to suit the effects given. Due to the long system of having it work along that line. Its hard to do all that jut making it something like so. From what I typed within the effects verses what you had. In a way this dimension technique can still exist as Tsukiyomi was a Genjutsu with a Time/Space effect to it. So in a way this technique falls under that.
A place where one is kept as either punishment, or for training. Another dimension created where the time is accelerated. The time in this portal goes by ten years a day, making the person age. The space is infinite, being what the creator of the dimension wants it to be. When finally pulled out of the dimension, the age process reverses. However, the mental AND physical toll is critical and very real. Though balance is restored to ones body, excluding major bodily changes.
Rank: ?
CD | SD : 800 + 600 < New Costs

Mine:

Yours:

5. Medical: Mind Enhancement.
This jutsu coats the body of the target in a form of chakra the boosts mind to body coordination by entering the brain. It does have a downfall in the end though.
Rank: B > Change to E
CD|SD: 300| 120 > New Costs (75 + 11)
Effect: Boosts Actions to target by +1 for 2 posts
Drawback: 5% Mind Damage when expired < Making Mind Gauge -5% and safer on your or partner’s end.
Restriction: Cannot stack on same target
Approved with these effects and costs.

I'm fine with all of the above. The only thing missing is the Out of Battle effect on #4. I suppose it would be very similar to what you have. Your way actually makes this a little easier. Let me take a stab at it.

Time & Space Effect: Target(s) hidden and concealed from outside world for 'X' amount of days + 1 Day = 10 Years (MAX HP & Nexus Attributes / (Years x 1.5) [Rounded Down] = New Max HP & Base Attributes. (Effects last for 'X' amount of Days.) + Can be broken out of if held as prisoner (User's Max Chakra - Target's Max Chakra = Word Count to escape)

So are you aiming to have the genjutsu not truly be a genjutsu to where its not damaging the mind either?

Exactly. That's why it's a Time & Space technique. You see all these Ninjutsu Time & Space, I wanted to mix it up with a Genjutsu type.
I'm not opposed to adding Mind Dmg that sticks around for a few days after, if that's something you think needs to happen.

I see well be sure to note that Genjutsu's do cause Mind Gauge to decrease by a certain degree. Others not so much. I believe only a few do mind gauge damage but not all.

Fair enough. How about + 50% Mind Damage for a week IF broken out of prematurely?

It can be done right then and there. Mind Gauge can be healed after going to see a doctor. Also it can be ranged from 66% to 75% the choice is up to you.