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PostSubject: Re: Asura Jiin's character approval requests   Asura Jiin's character approval requests - Page 5 EmptySun Apr 30 2017, 15:13

Reviewed and cleared for approved. The P.Effect are given based upon the ingot that is used. Its my fault for not informing Grave about that. so that P.Effect will vary based upon metals used and can also stack. Also adds to Damage based upon metal used.
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PostSubject: Re: Asura Jiin's character approval requests   Asura Jiin's character approval requests - Page 5 EmptySun Apr 30 2017, 23:05

Another jutsu and item post-- Selling 1, 3, 4 of Jutsu here for site. The rest I'll keep as personal jutsu I suppose-- just so no one else can mass replicate unless they pay me-- cause they are pretty good. But sold jutsu can still have owners that wont work on them?

Either way there it is. Also don't forget to check the items please.

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PostSubject: Re: Asura Jiin's character approval requests   Asura Jiin's character approval requests - Page 5 EmptySat May 13 2017, 00:16

Corrections-- made from skype conversation with Grave. Removing the Rubber shield. :

1.[+ -Tai-ken Style: Snip the Web - >]
[> Jutsu Description]: A Taijutsu move utilizing the use of a sword. A precision based series of slashes designed for attacks-- but also work to disrupt enemy tools that depend on a constant stream of chakra. This jutsu is most effective against the art of "Puppetry" ninjutsu to severe chakra strings and prevent their involvement.
[+ Stamina Cost:] <
[+ Type:] < - [Offensive & Supplementary]
[+ Hand Seal(s) + Rank:] < - 0 + C
[+ Damage +/or Effect] < Cut Puppet/Chakra strings and negate related jutsu. + Target enemy may not use Puppetry tools or jutsu for 1 turn.
[+ Requirements+/or Restrictions]: Requires Tai-ken style + User must have an active Chakra Blade/weapon to use this jutsu.

2.[+ - Doton: Seismic Pulse Jutsu - >]
[> Jutsu Description]: By training to the peak of one's potential in Earth-Release, one can become one with the earth and learn to wait and listen. With this jutsu, one's senses become one with the earth below to allow them a powerful sensory ability. By feeling the vibrations in the earth, one can detect hidden enemies and traps with incredible accuracy that sight or sound couldn't reprieve. Its an excellent tool to use against the Silent Mist technique and other combat scenarios that makes sight impossible.
[+ Chakra & Stamina Cost:] < - [Leave Blank] (Upkeep)
[+ Type:] < - [Supplementary]
[+ Hand Seal(s) + Rank:] < - Stomps foot to the ground + C class
[+ Effect] < - User gains full sensory awareness of a 1 kilometer radius around self (no eyesight/sound required) . Negate stealth/concealment/trap jutsu and Stealth Dice =30 instantly.

[+ Requirements + Restrictions]: Enemies must be in contact with the ground. Levitated/Flight enemies are not detected.
[+ Parent Jutsu:] < - Heightened Senses Ability.
[+ Creator:] Asura Jiin.

3.+ - Doton: Doryūheki/Mud Wall - >
> The user creates a wall of earth via their chakra or manipulation of surrounding soil. The wall is created to defend against powerful attacks. The wall is infused with chakra which allows it to take a variety of attacks from enemy ninjutsu.
+ Chakra & Stamina Cost:
+ Type: Defense
+ Hand Seal(s) + Rank: 4+ B
+ Effect: Blocks Damage= END X 1.20

Rasengan Jutsu-- (No critique was made to fix this so assume its correct. )

Making new jutsu to replace lava shield.


(4) + - Youton: Molten Core Chakra Mode- >
> User draws in the thermal energy of the ground and infuses it with their chakra-- causing an aura of lava to cloak the caster. Though its chakra manifested, it carries the same durability and intense heat of molten lava. It acts as an armor and weapon for close quarter combat. To use this jutsu makes the user one with the land and heat of the depths of the earth. To attack carelessly against this force will bring one’s own destruction upon them. It is rumored the internal temperature the caster generates from this jutsu is close to the temperature of the earth's mantle-- hotter than any material can withstand.
+ Chakra & Stamina Cost: (Upkeep)
+ Type: Offense, Defense, Supplementary.
+ Hand Seal(s) + Rank: 5 (Unique hand sign) + S
+ Effect: STR + END X 1.40 + Taijutsu/Melee base-attacks dealt/received causes MAX burns to enemies + Youton Jutsu damage is increased by X 1.50

(Subject to change of staff disagree)
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PostSubject: Re: Asura Jiin's character approval requests   Asura Jiin's character approval requests - Page 5 EmptyFri May 19 2017, 14:34

Bump-- I';d like this approve before its buried again damnit!
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PostSubject: Re: Asura Jiin's character approval requests   Asura Jiin's character approval requests - Page 5 EmptyFri May 19 2017, 22:35

I'll be taking over for this part as I was in the area in doing so.

1.[+ -Tai-ken Style: Snip the Web - >]
[> Jutsu Description]: A Taijutsu move utilizing the use of a sword. A precision based series of slashes designed for attacks-- but also work to disrupt enemy tools that depend on a constant stream of chakra. This jutsu is most effective against the art of "Puppetry" ninjutsu to severe chakra strings and prevent their involvement.
[+ Stamina Cost:] <
[+ Type:] < - [Offensive & Supplementary]
[+ Hand Seal(s) + Rank:] < - 0 + C
[+ Damage +/or Effect] < Cut Puppet/Chakra strings and negate related jutsu. + Target enemy may not use Puppetry tools or jutsu for 1 turn.
[+ Requirements+/or Restrictions]: Requires Tai-ken style + User must have an active Chakra Blade/weapon to use this jutsu.

APPROVED

2.[+ - Doton: Seismic Pulse Jutsu - >]
[> Jutsu Description]: By training to the peak of one's potential in Earth-Release, one can become one with the earth and learn to wait and listen. With this jutsu, one's senses become one with the earth below to allow them a powerful sensory ability. By feeling the vibrations in the earth, one can detect hidden enemies and traps with incredible accuracy that sight or sound couldn't reprieve. Its an excellent tool to use against the Silent Mist technique and other combat scenarios that makes sight impossible.
[+ Chakra & Stamina Cost:] < - [Leave Blank] (Upkeep)
[+ Type:] < - [Supplementary]
[+ Hand Seal(s) + Rank:] < - Stomps foot to the ground + C class
[+ Effect] < - User gains full sensory awareness of a 1 kilometer radius around self (no eyesight/sound required) . Negate stealth/concealment/trap jutsu and Stealth Dice =30 instantly.
[+ Requirements + Restrictions]: Enemies must be in contact with the ground. Levitated/Flight enemies are not detected.
[+ Parent Jutsu:] < - Heightened Senses Ability.
[+ Creator:] Asura Jiin.

x No, I understand what it does but not instantly roll I will only allow it to be at least +5 but that is it. As even sensory type shinobi cannot get a 100% accurate reading of someone they are looking for as shown during the fourth shinobi war.

3.+ - Doton: Doryūheki/Mud Wall - >
> The user creates a wall of earth via their chakra or manipulation of surrounding soil. The wall is created to defend against powerful attacks. The wall is infused with chakra which allows it to take a variety of attacks from enemy ninjutsu.
+ Chakra & Stamina Cost:
+ Type: Defense
+ Hand Seal(s) + Rank: 4+ B
+ Effect: Blocks Damage= END X 1.20

APPROVED

Rasengan Jutsu-- (No critique was made to fix this so assume its correct. )

Making new jutsu to replace lava shield.

(4) + - Youton: Molten Core Chakra Mode- >
> User draws in the thermal energy of the ground and infuses it with their chakra-- causing an aura of lava to cloak the caster. Though its chakra manifested, it carries the same durability and intense heat of molten lava. It acts as an armor and weapon for close quarter combat. To use this jutsu makes the user one with the land and heat of the depths of the earth. To attack carelessly against this force will bring one’s own destruction upon them. It is rumored the internal temperature the caster generates from this jutsu is close to the temperature of the earth's mantle-- hotter than any material can withstand.
+ Chakra & Stamina Cost: (Upkeep)
+ Type: Offense, Defense, Supplementary.
+ Hand Seal(s) + Rank: 5 (Unique hand sign) + S
+ Effect: STR + END X 1.40 + Taijutsu/Melee base-attacks dealt/received causes MAX burns to enemies + Youton Jutsu damage is increased by X 1.50

x Changes that is too high for an S rank technique they would have to be lowered to be at least to x1.25 As they surpass the powers of several site made techniques. They must stay under that.

(Subject to change of staff disagree)
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PostSubject: Re: Asura Jiin's character approval requests   Asura Jiin's character approval requests - Page 5 EmptyFri May 19 2017, 22:41

2.[+ - Doton: Seismic Pulse Jutsu - >]
[> Jutsu Description]: By training to the peak of one's potential in Earth-Release, one can become one with the earth and learn to wait and listen. With this jutsu, one's senses become one with the earth below to allow them a powerful sensory ability. By feeling the vibrations in the earth, one can detect hidden enemies and traps with incredible accuracy that sight or sound couldn't reprieve. Its an excellent tool to use against the Silent Mist technique and other combat scenarios that makes sight impossible.
[+ Chakra & Stamina Cost:] < - [Leave Blank] (Upkeep)
[+ Type:] < - [Supplementary]
[+ Hand Seal(s) + Rank:] < - Stomps foot to the ground + C class
[+ Effect] < - User gains full sensory awareness of a 1 kilometer radius around self (no eyesight/sound required) . Negate stealth/concealment/trap jutsu and Stealth Dice =+5 instantly.
[+ Requirements + Restrictions]: Enemies must be in contact with the ground. Levitated/Flight enemies are not detected.
[+ Parent Jutsu:] < - Heightened Senses Ability.
[+ Creator:] Asura Jiin.

HOpe this one is better.

(4) + - Youton: Molten Core Chakra Mode- >
> User draws in the thermal energy of the ground and infuses it with their chakra-- causing an aura of lava to cloak the caster. Though its chakra manifested, it carries the same durability and intense heat of molten lava. It acts as an armor and weapon for close quarter combat. To use this jutsu makes the user one with the land and heat of the depths of the earth. To attack carelessly against this force will bring one’s own destruction upon them. It is rumored the internal temperature the caster generates from this jutsu is close to the temperature of the earth's mantle-- hotter than any material can withstand.
+ Chakra & Stamina Cost: (Upkeep)
+ Type: Offense, Defense, Supplementary.
+ Hand Seal(s) + Rank: 5 (Unique hand sign) + S
+ Effect: STR + END X 1.25 + Taijutsu/Melee base-attacks dealt/received causes MAX burns to enemies + Youton Jutsu damage is increased by X 1.25

Okay I put 1.25 . Word of warning though, i got an inferno style chakra mode coming up that is Hi-jutsu later on ideally 1.50 so let me know what happens.


Also, the Rasengan, you didn't say anything about it so ill repost it here. But look to the spoiler sections in previous posts to see it.

5. + - Doton: Rasengan—Torment of Atlas - >
>A Variation of the Rasengan created by a rogue ninja of Iwa. Named after the Titan, Atlas who was said to hold up the very planet on his back through the sea of chaos as punishment for his crimes. Focusing enhanced earth-chakra into the Rasengan, the chakra becomes denser. Pieces of earth orbit around the sphere and it glows with a darkness like black onyx. This deceptive jutsu takes the form of a powerful attack—but its true power comes in its massive gravity it inflicts upon the target. The infused chakra that makes contact will put so much pressure on the enemy, they won’t be able to lift a finger. A truly fearful jutsu, indeed.
+ Chakra & Stamina Cost:
+ Type: Offense + Supplementary
+ Hand Seal(s) + Rank: 0+ S+
+ Damage + Effect: 300 + Target’s Nexus Stats reduced by X 0.50 & Target Dice Rolls = 0 for 3 turns.
+ Drawbacks and Restrictions:
+ Parent Jutsu: Rasengan, Doton: Ultimate Lead Body Weight, Doton: Yomi Hasaiki

+ Creator: Asura Jiin

Note: This one may too be a bit too much. Maybe as a custom jutsu but thought I'd give it a try. The 50% debuff might not work but let me know what I can fix up. 25% might be more feasible. But you can see the attempt clearly. A Rasengan version of Doton's finest techniques.

This needs approvbal-- also all the items i made in items.




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PostSubject: Re: Asura Jiin's character approval requests   Asura Jiin's character approval requests - Page 5 EmptyFri May 19 2017, 22:43

That is because it was not posted on the above post that you placed up. I only reviewed the latest post that you posted. I'll go over it once you have done so.
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PostSubject: Re: Asura Jiin's character approval requests   Asura Jiin's character approval requests - Page 5 EmptyFri May 19 2017, 22:44

Um, the latest post was corrections made with Grave-- from that first seciton. He and i talked it on skype, so you can check with him Its all part of the first request, and I made the changes so it should be good.
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Sorry, about that yeah I have talked with Zaber about the corrections that needed to be taken for them.
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PostSubject: Re: Asura Jiin's character approval requests   Asura Jiin's character approval requests - Page 5 EmptyFri May 19 2017, 22:56

If changes are to be made its best to always keep them on the thread. This way if anything that happens while another member reviews this information will not be confused as to why its one thing when it reads something else.

This also helps me review the techniques a bit easier I'm fine if you update them through skype but remember they are still going here so just cause "Grave" said its okay it should always be shown that you say, "Okay so these are my changes with Grave as we spoke and he said, etc etc" By showing a bit of the chat information or history can help in the long run I promise just not too much.

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PostSubject: Re: Asura Jiin's character approval requests   Asura Jiin's character approval requests - Page 5 EmptyFri May 19 2017, 23:00

Let me rephrase. First of all, I can't edit my previous application because after a certtain amount of time, you can't edit it. Its just how this stupid site works.

Second, id love for it to be on here, but neither you or Grave were around so he just poked at it and we discussed approachable changes on skype-- which I reposed said jutsu here. I can't help it if some people are too lazy to come on. We need more attendance to this please.

If you want, ill repost the entire jutsu section, but i have to do all the fucking coding again. I am not asking a lot from you to just go back up to a page at least and see the last formated application. Its all there, but I cannot edit it to make it more acceptable.

ALl the posts after that format are corrections.
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